Rynestar's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pokemon: Pee Red Version]

Haha

The best pokemon parody to hit Newgrounds. You nailed every joke about the the original Pokemon series (such as MissingNo.) while making fun of the remake Fire Red. I really enjoyed this, hope to see more of your flash cartoons to come.

OrangePylon responds:

Thanks. :3

[Left 4 Speed 2]

Not worth the hype

It was alright but not as hilarious as the first Left 4 Speed. While I laughed at the zombie humping the Redneck in the face, the rest just didn't make me laugh. It seemed that you focused more on inside jokes such as the in-game levels (which makes sense) but adding irrelevant 4chan humor killed it. Pretty much, you told jokes which most people probably wouldn't get. If i didn't own the game nor visit 4chan, I wouldn't have gotten most of the jokes myself.

The other thing I didn't like was the way you made Nick seem like the only sensible one while the other three party members were complete idiots. Seriously, how many times do we have to see the "Im the only smart one and everyone else here is idiots!" type flash cartoons do we have to see? In the original Left 4 Speed, while everyone wasn't smart, you did parody their looks and personality. For example, Francis accident prone (shooting the car with the alarm), Louis was the sterotypical black guy, Bill was the military know-all, and Zoey was just some teenage chick.
While you tried doing some of that stuff with this flash as well (Coach all about sports, Ellis being a redneck), you didn't reflect on Nick's personality of the fact that he's a gambler and a conman but instead focused on him being the "only smart one with common sense." You made Rochelle a chick that moaned the entire flash, devoid of any personality except for the fact that shes "dumb".
The fact that this flash was devoid of music kind of felt like I was watching something plain and humorless instead of something funny.

Overall, I did like the art, it was clearly in the style of Oney, and the voice acting was spectacular with HappyHarry and Sonicmega. I really hate giving terrible reviews, but I hope you see my review as helpful criticism instead of just flames and hate. Come on guys, I know you can do way better than this!

Oney responds:

thanks for the feedback, but i do not use 4chan, at all.